Wednesday, April 13, 2016

I saved the day

Write story here: it was Johnny’s birthday and we were swimming in the creek.we swam to the bottom and caught crulies at the bottom it was so deep,it was way over my head .We saw some big cocabillys at the bottom. so we go the nets and a then we dived. down, down, down, smack .it hit the bottom. it was a a lot shallower than we thought.I came up to the surface and tocke a deep breath.I swam down to the bottom.there they were, at the bottom.4 big fat spoty cocabills.I scoped up the net.

I had caught all of them. two of them had black and brown spots and the other one had green stripes.it was so cool .We saw a big fat green frog.We dived in.I hit the bottom again .All the air rushed out of my lungs.I swan up wards despreat for air butt my foot was stuck under a rock. and i couldn’t get to the surface.Tyler jumped in and got my foot unstuck .I came to the surface of the water and i had the biggest deepest breath i had ever took.The air was so nice and cool’d. It filled my lungs and blew through my hair.Tyler came out of the water with the frog in one hand and the rock in the other.the end.

By Dylan

My goal.
For spelling i have to chunk up and sound out my words for spelling.and keep adding

Thursday, October 22, 2015

Skiing 2015

Swish Swish ... I was coming down the boneyard in my ski lesson. We were practicing parallel ski turns . Crash! I had smashed into a lump of snow and landed on my face. I got up and carried on down the track. All the others had passed me now and where waiting at the bottom. Donna, the lady teaching us, said that we were all ready to go up the top if we wanted but she suggested that we should all practice and then do the giant first.

As we got higher it got hotter. The giant was hot enough as far as I was concerned but we knew that it would get hotter and sunnier the higher we got. So we did the giant and then went back down to the cafe and got some sun block on.

Up the chairlift we went. We had to get off the movenpick chairlift and get on another one to get to the top .

The view was amazing!! You could even see Ohakune. Blair said that we should go the hard way and ... vroom ... off he went before we could even protest. So we shrugged our shoulders at each other and started to go down. 

So there we were on the side of one of the hardest tracks. Smash, crash and bash. James, Lauren and Sarah had crashed. It was just Johnny, Blair and me. We got to the bottom and waited. About twelve crashes later the others had got down and we got on the chairlift to come down again. We ended up going down ... four times.

I am so proud of myself because my goal was to go down the giant. But I went one better and went up the top.

On the way home everyone went to mcd's and I got a crispy chicken burger and a large combo. My goal for next year is to go from the top to the bottom without crashing.